Here is a compiled list of my favorite responses of mine to my peers blog post's.
The first one is my favorite
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The Adventures of Arista's Dad
Wow, you did a really great job with this review and response. I can tell that there was some careful though processes in which you laid out your information about other countries and there wayward decisions.
Democratic nations are entity's in which can be very hard to control financially. Its my opinion that financially they can be similar to a kid with money that has been told not to spend it because it belongs to someone else. Really? You expect them not to spend that money.
A lot of the time, due to the non-clarity of governmental decisions and of those you are campaigning investors will be weary of the government entity's. However it should also be disclosed that sometimes that non-clarity is present because of investors. Who's really in control? Whats their plan?
I am particularly not excited about the election. Both administrations scare me. I think they all have something to hide and they all have their own agenda's outside of that they pose for the voters and supporters.
I would say the only thing that needs to be worked here is your grammar. Take the last paragraph for instance. I feel that there should be a comma after, "All told." Then you say,"lp's says." Is there multiple people saying something? Then lastly, if they are saying something or your quoting them citation needs to be used. Those are just things I caught wright away.
Overall, I love the response it was very good.
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The Lane Adventures of Liz
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Wow! Your page is beautiful, I love the colors! Everything is organized and easy to read!
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